I think what you wrote was very reasonable. However, think on this, suppose you added a little content? I ain't saying your content is not solid, but suppose you added something that grabbed people's attention? I mean منو بابام همین الان یهویی ...
:: به تنهایی ام افتخار میکنم،چون میدانم تحمل تنهایی بهتر از گدایی محبت است.!!! is a little boring. You could glance at Yahoo's front page and note how they create news titles to grab viewers interested. You might add a related video or a picture or two to grab people excited about everything've got to say. Just my opinion, it could make your blog a little bit more interesting.
a little content? I ain't saying your content is not solid, but suppose you added something
that grabbed people's attention? I mean منو بابام همین الان یهویی ...
:: به تنهایی ام افتخار میکنم،چون میدانم تحمل تنهایی بهتر از گدایی
محبت است.!!! is a little boring. You could glance at Yahoo's front page and note how they create news titles
to grab viewers interested. You might add a related video or a picture
or two to grab people excited about everything've got to say.
Just my opinion, it could make your blog a little bit more interesting.